Could you help me review my Networking & Security Assignment 4?

Hi!
Could you help me by peer reviewing my Networking & Security Assignment 4 on Coursera?

My name is: William Wilson

Here is a link to the review:
https://www.coursera.org/learn/security/peer/msgK2/04-secure-data-storage-app/review/xFhrHzA8Eei0pQ6JQ3IqNA

Thanks!